As I walked slowly all alone,
Completely lost into my own,
Moving ahead without looking back,
I heard something,
Something which was very known,
Something which was once very close to my heart,
Some kind of voice,
Some familiar laughter,
Some whisper into my ears,
Some unforgettable giggles,
As somebody called my name,
That voice still gives me thousand blows of wind,
And I started melting,
All of a sudden I looked back with hope,
And there was no one,
I was all alone on that long silent road,
Damn.. I am still missing him,
And I started moving ahead without looking back,
With a tears in my eyes and a sharp pain in my heart,
I am moving ahead without looking back....
14 comments:
I will only say on this is,
"Keep on enjoying all the time..
Just forget about that time..
Try to laugh out with world...
Nd see who u get more voices calling
out u 4m behind...
Oops! i mean.. forward this time... :)"
Best Wishes!
heyyy..prabhjot...thanx...
keep smiling..
take care..:)
That voice still gives me thousand blows of wind.
Lovely but not in the context of the verse. As i always told that you have the traits of a poet ;)but i would love to see some smile in there...wht say ?
Keep Rocking,
PN.
Hey PN..thanx 4 every word.. :)
U too keep rocking always..
Take care..
That was nice...
As the mind meanders...:-)
take care..
excellent
heyy SM thanx dat u liked..:)
take care..
Hey waiting for next poem or post.
heyy SM.. hmm soon..
take care.. :)
just keep mobing..slowly the tears will dry away and with a soft breeze that caresses the face, a smile will adorn the lovely face :D
Hii ani_aset.. vry sweet lines u said buddy..thanks so much..
enjoy life..
take care..
touching!!
dang!!I wish I could stop looking back :(.
Keep it up.
u rock <3
heyy Rawan.. thanx buddy.. and yeah try to luk forward..:)I appreciate dat u visited..
keep smiling..
do visit again..
take care..
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